Day 8 + 9! (1/3) Heaven Sent Me - Main Story (archiveofourown.org/works/699253...) by @tarakute.bsky.social This was an awesome intro to your work Tara, you're an immaculate writer and I can't wait to get to your other works.
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The internal dialogue here is wrote to perfection, every line giving you lovely details about Jack and how she thinks, how she functions, how she justifies things to herself, how she makes sense of everything. It's awesome, it makes the rest of the story work as well as it does.
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Without that, the horror elements really wouldn't land as well. There's too many specific moments to name, but the way Jack is broken down is beautiful. It's not all at once, it's a slow burn across the whole thing. From confusion, to apprehension, to it feeling good-
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until it feels way too good to deny, until she lips into seeing herself as Jackies little sister. The minor changes in dialogue of how Jack speaks internally, like how she refers to Jackie and Helena.
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It's also amazingly set up in such a way for Mags to follow on from, which is a testament to both yours and Mags writing skills to be able to set up and follow through for the other. I can only imagine what Mags main story and your Epiliogue for it are like. (I'll get to it soon hopefully)
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While ntr isn't a major interest of mine, at least normally isn't. Here it's amazing, you combine it alongside so many things which I love. From being forcefully changed into a 'better' version of you by making you 'worse', to the pleasure reward system that reinforces itself-
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those are both great and I deeply love but most of all, the electricity here.. I'm a big fan of the super fucked up kinky shit you can do with it in ficiton and here, with electrodes into her brain... the constant shocks.. fuck yes. The "Bzzt~" fucking get me everytime.
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This also continues the sister corruption that Mags and Roxy have developed in me. For both reasons, I love this quote so much. "An android is a sister is a god. It almost makes sense, in that soon-to-be-lobotomised-by-high-voltage-electric-currents-shooting-through-your-brain kind of way."
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I don't know where else to mention it but that counting part was awesome! I can’t wait to read more because even if there might be something I’m not super into, your prowess for storytelling is so captivating that I’d be a fool not to read more.
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Thank you so much ehehe, this is really nice to read!
sep 1, 2025, 4:01 pm • 1 0 • view
You’ve got me hooked now, it will not be the last (if you’re cool with that of course)
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