Leaning straight in how broken up Jack is, to the point that she isn't even a person anymore is perfect. The full flipside of what Jackie was meant to be. It's so perfectly fitting. Then the level of desbasement while Jack is already broken down, that's so fucked up and makes it all so-
much hotter. It makes everything Tara wrote fuck with me more and then what you wrote fucks with me more because of what Tara wrote, fucking feedback loop of wonderful fucked up ideas. And then I am obsessed with how you wrote her finally breaking.
It's natural, the only choice there ever was but it wasn't a choice either, that's the point. It was inevitable, fated to happen. There's no need for a giant build up, it just happens, because it was always going to, there is no other reality. Fuck yes.
Thank you for adding to the sister corruption more here as seems normal at this point. I can't wait to get to your main story and see what you cooked up there!
ehehe yeah this one drove me nuts while i was writing it. it’s got a lot of little love letters to other, much better authors than myself (tara and kallie among them) and some historical inspiration (the trilby else vintage hypnokink stuff) but i’m really really really pleased with it.
Oh thats really cool to know! Thank you for sharing that!