When one beloved dies there is no need for rain. Tears will wet the earth Wrote this haiku when I was about 12. #haiku
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Nice keep writing
aug 23, 2025, 1:57 am • 1 0 • view
Wow wow wow
aug 23, 2025, 10:35 pm • 0 0 • view
Third lines have 7 beats But nice poem anyway
aug 23, 2025, 12:31 pm • 0 0 • view
Thought it was 5-7-5.
aug 23, 2025, 2:15 pm • 0 0 • view
Yes It is 5 7 5 But that middle line counted 5
aug 23, 2025, 2:51 pm • 1 0 • view
Actually, now that you mention it, the poem is 6-6-5 (I’m counting “beloved” as 3 syllables). Oh, well, I guess it’s a modern free-form haiku. 🤷🏼
aug 23, 2025, 3:04 pm • 0 0 • view
It's ok .
aug 23, 2025, 2:34 am • 1 0 • view
It’s beautiful
aug 23, 2025, 2:00 pm • 1 0 • view