Oh, I definitely don't think these are bad as shots. There is just something uncaptured about the fact that even the half dozen people who DO see instrumentation, have at best a mental picture of what's outside. And if you need to use that picture to make choices that could get everyone killed
yeah!! yeah that's fundamentally a huge part of what's compelling to me about the narrative.
Exactly, and I want to see someone go all in on the moment when "you are wrong" about what's going on outside but it doesn't cut out to show us the audience. Instead we're stuck inside as tensions raise and the stakes mount