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The Radical Capitalist @theradcap.bsky.social

Drop "already" and your sentence will be stronger. Instead of "you dont need to say", say "Don't say". Drop "as it is" from the last sentence. Everyone should seek to improve their sentences.

aug 27, 2025, 5:46 am • 1 0

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rescanous.bsky.social @rescanous.bsky.social

My grade 11 English teacher called those extra words “deadwood.” I cannot count all the red inked lines drawn through my and my classmates papers!

aug 27, 2025, 7:53 am • 2 0 • view