That's better, but still requires more work for the viewer (and again, I'll put the work in as an existing Rider nerd, this isn't helpful to drawing in noobs) than just having a normal YouTube video (like Ultraman does! There's an existing standard) would be.
And I know the UK is only really in there because, having done English subs for America they might as well include us as well, but it feels a shame the first real push on Kamen Rider for us almost seems doomed to wind up not looking the effort from the start.