Thanks Owen :)

Of course! You have a really strong grid but let it flow into the illustration in a very nice way. Your typography is excellent too. No runts, orphans or widows, and a nice line length. Very strong use of color and interplay between type and illustration as well. Just excellent work all around!

*actually there is 1 runt at the end of chaos with a little room to balance the rag, but that's a very minor issue that could be adjust in like 2 seconds, and if the rest of your layout is any indication, I'm sure you would have caught it before the final published version.

Ahhh I was hoping you wouldn't notice :p thanks a lot that's all very kind!

Yeah, sorry for the caveat.. I just didn't want someone else popping in to "um actually" on it when you really did do an excellent job.

It's okay I'm going to get a perfect score next time

Hell, ain't nobody keeping score here. All you can do is better than you did before. As long as you're refining and improving your craft you got nothing to worry about. (I can spot my errors in every published book I worked on and it makes me cringe every time 😅)