I love your work, but that is not a Haiku. You have 6, 3, 4 syllables. A Haiku has 5, 7, 5 syllables.
I love your work, but that is not a Haiku. You have 6, 3, 4 syllables. A Haiku has 5, 7, 5 syllables.
Traditional Japanese haiku are structured that way, but that convention is not necessarily followed in English. (Japanese haiku are also written on a single line, while 3 lines are most commonly used in English.) English haiku tend to follow the spirit of the Japanese haiku, but …
Is that sort of like following “the convention of birth control”, but just winging it? 🤪
… the emphasis is on nature, seasonal changes, and strong imagery.
I was corrected myself by a University professor, not an elementary school teacher. Is the person you quote a Japanese person who is a literature expert?