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Jeffrey Whitsett @jeffreywhitsett.bsky.social

I love your work, but that is not a Haiku. You have 6, 3, 4 syllables. A Haiku has 5, 7, 5 syllables.

sep 1, 2025, 5:26 pm • 0 0

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Aislinn @imnotmerida.com

Traditional Japanese haiku are structured that way, but that convention is not necessarily followed in English. (Japanese haiku are also written on a single line, while 3 lines are most commonly used in English.) English haiku tend to follow the spirit of the Japanese haiku, but …

sep 1, 2025, 5:35 pm • 0 0 • view
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Jeffrey Whitsett @jeffreywhitsett.bsky.social

Is that sort of like following “the convention of birth control”, but just winging it? 🤪

sep 1, 2025, 9:25 pm • 0 0 • view
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Aislinn @imnotmerida.com

… the emphasis is on nature, seasonal changes, and strong imagery.

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sep 1, 2025, 5:35 pm • 0 0 • view
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Jeffrey Whitsett @jeffreywhitsett.bsky.social

I was corrected myself by a University professor, not an elementary school teacher. Is the person you quote a Japanese person who is a literature expert?

sep 1, 2025, 9:21 pm • 0 0 • view